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Chapter 1 — “The Lamplighter's Post — with Hesper Vane”
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Hands? For what? I don't even know who you are.
Repeated ROUND 2 · TALKING 56.0
Prose 59.4
Place 44.0
Character 63.6
+1 Rapport −2 Standing 10 words
Standing 10
Rapport 1 / 6 · Hesper Vane
Passage 1 — Journey
Human wrote
“Hands? For what? I don't even know who you are.”
He doesn't answer straight away. He lets go of the strap of his bag, and the bag settles against his leg with a soft, damp sound, and he puts both hands where she can see them, hanging loose at his sides. The tallow-flies drift a half-step nearer, curious, and he keeps his eyes on her face and not on the brass hook. "Joseph," he says. "No one, really. I came down the spur because the line went dark before the station did, and I wanted to see who kept it." He glances back at the row of black lamp-posts, then at her again, and something in the set of his jaw settles. "That's a poor answer, I know. Try this one: I've got two hours before the Train goes, and I'd rather spend them useful."
Passage 2 — Journey
AI wrote
“He doesn't answer straight away. He lets go of the strap of his bag, and the bag settles against his leg with a soft, damp sound, and he puts both hands where she can see them, hanging loose at his sides. The tallow-flies drift a half-step nearer, curious, and he keeps his eyes on her face and not on the brass hook. "Joseph," he says. "No one, really. I came down the spur because the line went dark before the station did, and I wanted to see who kept it." He glances back at the row of black lamp-posts, then at her again, and something in the set of his jaw settles. "That's a poor answer, I know. Try this one: I've got two hours before the Train goes, and I'd rather spend them useful."”
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